Landing Page Hero Copy From a Shaky First Draft

What This Prompt Does

Generates many headlines so you can pick what actually fits your voice.

Separates hype from the concrete 'how it works' line.

Forces honest handling when you do not have metrics yet.

When to Use It

Launching a new offer or landing page.

When your current hero sounds like every other SaaS site.

Before paying for ads on copy you have not stress-tested.

Best For:Indie Hackers And Marketers

The Prompt

Copy-Paste Ready

Product or service in one line: [WHAT YOU SELL] Audience: [WHO BUYS] Main pain: [WHAT HURTS] Proof you have (even small): [TESTIMONIAL, METRIC, LOGO, OR NONE YET] My ugly first draft: [PASTE] Rewrite: 1) 10 headline options — mix bold, plain, and playful. 2) Pick your top 3 and explain why in one line each. 3) A subhead that explains the how, not just hype. 4) Primary CTA + secondary CTA (example: Start free / Book a 15-min call). 5) A short 'below the fold' section outline: 3 bullets of what to promise next. Avoid fake statistics. If we have no numbers, say that honestly.

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